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Daily Goal: Met

Well I made it through the lasagna scene rewrite today.  I think I did a pretty decent job of parsing in what I could use from the original version and correcting her reactions to make them fit better with the stuff that now comes before.  Next up, the second phone call from our killer.  I was never happy with this on the front end.  It should be this a very suspenseful call, and the aftermath should be a much longer period of suspense than I had before when it was the first phone call.  There’s much more at stake now, so it’s important to keep that apparent.  Need sleep though.